Things that scare me:
Round 1 is still well below factory cost.
Round 2 has a weaker checklist.
Round 2 only has 2 hits instead of 3, even if the box is cheaper it wont help.
16-box case in my opinion is too large for a master case, should have kept it at 10 and possibly 5 box inners.
I just dont see how this one is going to do well, especially when the Round 1 boxes dropped below cost quickly.
get well soon Christopher McKnight. Shame your story doesn't get more attention.