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Old 10-16-2012, 01:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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tajikey said it very nicely.

OP, one thing you can always look at when writing - and you are not happy with how it reads - is to flip it.

In this instance:

Compared to conventional food manufacturers, organic farming treats animals the right way and puts less toxic chemicals in the environment.
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