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Old Yesterday, 09:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Sentence Structure help punctuation

Hey guys, I need a proof reader real quick. I have the following sentence, it contains Four terms and their definitions. What punctuation mark should be added after the term but before the meaning? The sentence just doesn't seem right to me....



These four approaches are the Utilitarian Approach, which is the greater good approach, the Individual Approach, which is what is in the best interest of the decision maker, the Moral-Rights Approach, the respecting of fundamental human rights approach and lastly the Justice Approach, which is based on fairness and equity.
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Semi-colon after each definition?

#notanenglishmajorbutItalksgood
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Fix your grammar first, it's a mess. Then worry about commas.

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And maybe a colon after 'are'?
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Thanks Sonnyday, you are right about the grammar.. This is a rough draft so i still plan on going back over it but the sentence structure was bothering me to no end. Not to mention, this is the first assignment I have had where there is a word cap.

Thanks for looking this over TrueNE 09 as well.
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Let's eat, grandma.
Let's eat grandma.

That is all.
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Quote:
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Let's eat, grandma.
Let's eat grandma.

That is all.
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You don't need to put "which is" after any of them.....
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Sorry, can't help you.....

I know 2 different types of English...Good English & Bad english.

Both will fail your homework assignment.
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